Review: Hour of Twilight

Hey! Andy here! I can already imagine what you're thinking: "You don't say."
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Until then, I will do this week's review, and guess what. This week we have "Hour of Twilight".
As the author tagged it: Tragedy, Sad, Dark, Alternate Universe, I can only agree with these tags. Although Slice of Life would be a good tag for it too.
Now, let's get back to the story.
I truly like the quote from the description:
"I will teach you what I have learned of pain. You will beg for death." This is a great beginning for the fic. Though, the description is too long for my tastes. I'd suggest a special chapter, but, it's only my opinion.
The story. What can I say? Just... amazing. Loved the plot, even though on some chapters I felt like the author rushed, meaning that he could use some description. On some other parts, I feel like there is too much description, and not enough action. Still, a great story, because this facts are not doing any harm to the actual story. Again, plot amazing, and the author never stopped amazing me with his imagination.
In the end, we give it a 9/10. "Hour of Twilight". It's something innovative for the Dark section.
Well, being a critic ain't really my type, but I hope I did something good. Keep tuned for more news and reviews.
As always, have a nice day!